Monday, May 18, 2015
The two areas my paper needed work is a weak thesis statement and bad MLA citations. I need to revamp my MLA skills and need to rewrite my thesis statement. I am also needing to fix my works cited page. My works cited page is not in alphabetical order and needs the last names to go first and to be indented. I need to not exactly rewrite my paper but I planing on writing it over this weekend. I need to make paragraphs right now my paper is one long paragraph it's ridiculous and I'm embarrassed. So basically what I see when looking over my edited paper from the professor is to fix the paragraphs and figure out the proper way to cite MLA also and strengthen my thesis.
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Remember to use the thesis statement from your milestone #2 -- the suggested wording will work really well. No need to feel stressed about your long paragraph structure. Just 'make a plan' with an outline or essay map, then cut and paste sections of your evidence into those parts of the paper that will help build an argument more clearly. --Prof. Dragan
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